COVER LETTER FOR:

General Management

Attn: Selection Committee

As you can see in the attached resume, I have considerable general, operational, administration, and sales management experience. Inclusive, are a minimum of 8 years multiple branch facilities operations in various types of service organizations as well as management experience in a variety of other industries.
Much of my experience includes client relations, administrative organization, operations, staff development, B2B sales, strategic planning, utilization of financial statements, Excel, Microsoft Access, budget, P&L, and developing customer support programs.I have successfully managed a work force from 15 up to 600+ employees. I am a well-organized and client/employee oriented, manager.
I will bring to your organization many profit oriented and acquired skills including: germinating relationships, developing and executing operational strategies, delivering excellent client care & support, implementing resource development, operations employee team building, budgeting and achieving P & L goals.
Sincerely
aschimmelman@cox.net
Glendale, AZ

This example was posted: 8/19/2010 1:17:03 PM EST

Is my experience to broad? Is my age a negative factor?


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Your letter lacks focus. What kind of job are you applying for ?

Anonymous reviewed this cover letter on Aug 19 10 at 5:50 pm

I am sorry this only allows us to select good or bad . . it is rarely that clear.

Your letter is very dense and I find it difficult to read. It does lack focus and, if it weren't for the salutation, I wouldn't be sure for which position you are applying. The inclusion of 'as you can see' at the beginning of the first sentence weakens your pitch. Try simplifying your sentences to make them easier and absorb. Use the company by name in the letter to prevent the appearance that this is a template. Make sure you are addressing specific points from the the ad's duties and requirements sections.

SkotGP reviewed this cover letter on Aug 19 10 at 6:55 pm

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