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Hello! Dear Administrator

How are you today? As this is a cover letter, so I would like to start by talking about me. Here it goes. Actually, I am quiet, caring, compassion, and idealist, and other people said that I am silly, confused, tolerant, and dreamer; also I am an independent think. I could never just follow the crowd unless they make a point of their view. My hobbies are tennis, walking, reading, watch sport games, bird watch, travel, and gardening. Unlike the old day, in recent day, I only watch some movies, and sometimes I watch some football games, news, and talk shows from TV or have fun for listening to radio as I used to do.
Secondly, I majored in the electric-electronic technology from the University Mackenzie in 1985 in San Paulo, Brazil. At that time, I was used to draw electro-domestic objects such as radio, blender, and TV with pencil. Majoring in Computer Aided Design in De Anza College, I did have many opportunities to create more diversity of designs through 3D modeling, which has helped me to learn better the design world. The reason that I choose this major is because I found myself that I was fond of drawing when I was taking the technical design drawing class at that time. Having gotten the lowdown in the computer lab whole day for design and accomplishing assignments, which is after goal in a big way to act out to pledge my major.
Third, as a disable person with the Aphasia disease, there are two facts I shall take into account to stand for my disability. The first one is that I am seeking for a job because regarding my current status, a international student with F1 visa, under immigration law I have to leave this country if I won’t be able to find a job within one year period conceded by the immigration office after graduating from my major. The second one is that as I am an autistic person I do not have a good speaking skill, and most of time I can stutter when I try to think proper word to give a right expression. So, with the lack of speaking skill, I just have this feeling that I would be slate for a job that doesn’t need very much speaking skill, and there is an alternative between my disability and ability; fortunately, I found my niche that is I love nature environment, and I am fun with activities related to nature environment such as gardening, bird watching, taking trip in a nature, and so on. And more than that they really fulfill me both physical and psychological need; in fact without intention I would find a job like the plant nursery, forestry industry, or similar alike activities as well rather than a job related to my major.
Best regards,
Sunnyvale, CA

This example was posted: 12/25/2009 8:14:18 PM EST

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maybe not as bad as it looks. It definitely give the hiring manager an idea of your grasp on English which will prevent surprises later on.

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